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Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Tech at Tamaki

Mrs Nua harangued us as we walked slowly down the road.
As we were walking an air of excitement was blowing very slow.
As we were sitting on the ground waiting for our teacher's I was thinking about what was in store for us.
I was looking forward to a brand new experience.

2 comments:

  1. Nice job Tamara, I like the way you have used some of the new vocab and phrases to improve your writing.
    Keep it up.
    Mrs Nua

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  2. Malo Tamara
    I especially liked your use of the word harangued. Good excerpt. Keep doing interesting writing.

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